There was a boy who had found a creek.. The boy had a cabin in the mountains. The creek was like his best friend. When his father called him in for dinner he would usually say good-by. There was a rainbow fish swimming. He was his best friend. They grew up together. One day a flood came and hit the cabin and the cabin was flooded. The boy was sad his best friend was gone. He landed in a rainbow land. His best friend was in rainbow land, but a man came and said get off rainbow land. "I don't know how I got here.Said the boy.
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April Graves
10/27/2013 01:00:33 pm
I love your imagination Deegan! We need to have you over again to play with the ducks and chickens down by the creek.
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Ally
10/27/2013 11:01:42 pm
Wow! I love your story Deegan! I am really impressed with your imaginative writing mixed with things I know you know about. Keep up the good work!!
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